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Calling All Poetry Lovers!

If you're in the CT area on June 6, 2012, join me as I read from my "Poetry for Tough Times" trilogy, followed by an open mike and book signing. 




Meet Hazel Mitchell!



Leave a comment here by March 1 for your chance to win a copy of the book!

HIDDEN NEW JERSEY by Linda J. Barth, illustrated by Hazel Mitchell, is packed with fun facts about New Jersey. On each page you'll learn a dozen or so interesting things about the Garden State. Did you know that the first professional basketball game and first baseball game with modern rules were played in NJ? Or that it has a science facility where horses run on a treadmill for exercise? Or that lava from a prehistoric volcano formed the ridges of the Watchung Mountains? Learn which famous people are associated with NJ, why it's called "the garden state," the reason for the boardwalk, the wildlife abundant there, and much more!

Admittedly, the rhyming verse on each spread is a bit off and the rhythm is not consistent. The same stanza is used twice about the shore when I think a second could have been easily written, especially with so many marvelous details at hand. The facts, too, should have been verified. For example, one page states that NJ is home to seven lighthouses and another page claims eight. Still, I think it reveals a fascinating history overall.

What really brings this book to life are the illustrations. Colorful and eye-catching, they invite young (and old!) readers to explore the pages again and again. There is just the right blend of images and white space, so the reader has plenty to see and learn without the book seeming too "busy." An added bonus is the "search & seek" feature. Each spread shows an average of five objects to find—and don't forget to look for the bumblebee throughout!

Because I enjoyed the illustrations so much, I invited Hazel Mitchell to answer a few questions. Presenting...

TEN MUST-KNOWS ABOUT HAZEL!

1. What is your favorite children's book of all time? Elidor by Alan Garner. He is a British author who writes fantasy novels and I remember reading this when I was about 10. It was my first real experience with contemporary fantasy and I love it still.

2. What is your favorite YA or adult book? Jane Eyre. Again this was the first real "adult" book and as soon as I finished it I started again. It's still a great escape.

3. If you could be any book character, who would you be and why? Lucy in Chronicles of Narnia. Lucy was one of the first characters I really identified with as a young reader. She is curious, adventurous, and fearless. I always looked into wardrobes from then on.

4. When did you know you wanted to be an illustrator? Since I realized that people could actually do it as a job. Just took me a long time to work out how I could do it as a job!

5. What/when/where was your first published piece? In the school magazine in about 1977. I was the art director. It was a cartoon of a mouse.

6. What is your favorite part of your job? least? Favorite—initial idea. The spark is the most exciting part, the visualization and roughing out. After that it's hard work! Least—erasing/clean-up.

7. What one piece of advice would you give those considering this field? Patience. The publishing industry works slowly.

8. What are your dreams for the future? A Caldecott! Okay, that's the top of the pile. Meanwhile I will be happy to publish something I have written and illustrated. Oh, and a movie premiere in Leicester Square Odeon, London.

9. What three things do you most like to do when you are not working? Being by or on the sea, traveling, eating great food.

10. Describe Hazel in one word. Impatient!

To check out HIDDEN NEW JERSEY and Hazel Mitchell's other books, go to hazelmitchell.com. To learn more about author Linda J. Barth and her tireless efforts to protect the environment, go to www.lindajbarth.com.

And, remember, leave a comment by March 1, 2012 to have a chance at winning your own copy of HIDDEN NEW JERSEY!

Poetry Contest Winner!



CONGRATS to the winner of the Watertown High School Poetry Contest!


DEADLINE————-x
by Hailey Chamberlin

HeadacheHandsShakingEyesSquinting_
_FrustratedFingertipsUncertainOfTheFinishLine_
_StrugglingToPourOutWhat'sAlreadyBeenDrained_
_Rules—TheseRulesAreFarFromWorthListeningTo_
_Stop. WritingReadingThinking._
_Time—TheySayTimeIs Everything..._
_TimedAssignments,TimedActivities,TimedClasses,_
_ButTimeToMyself...nosuchmeaning_
_TimeToCalmDown...UnheardOf_
_TimeToBeStressFree...NO_
_THIS.IS.YOUR.FAULT._
_HeadPoundingEyesStrained_HandsSpittingOutMeaninglessWords_
_WordsIDon'tEvenLike, WordsIHaveBeenTaught_
_ToUseAndReuse—OverAndOverLikeAnOldTatteredDishTowel_
–STOP!–
IsWhatIWantToHear, ButGoIsTheOpposite_
_ThereforeIAmDestinedToDoSo_
_goGoGO...FINISHmustFINISH_
_TeethChatteringLipsQuiveringMindBlowingUP_
_LastPunctuationCompletes the line_Period. X
I sit back and try to summon the courage to admire
But I don't care, for there is no energy to care, there is no reason to care.
Nothing matters...people, places, things, feelings, ME–
Doesn't matter.
Now Time...time matters.
Time is the only thing on my mind,
But I ask myself, "Is this worth my insanity?"
"This piece of paper with meaningless words?"...NO–
But I can't tell them, nothing matters to them,
Nothing but this insanity-driving deadline———x

Help for Caregivers

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Review of FREDDIE RAMOS ZOOMS TO THE RESCUE

Zapato Power: Freddie Ramos Zooms to the Rescue (by Jacqueline Jules, art by Miguel Benitez) is a delightful beginning reader chapter book. What kid doesn't want to feel like a hero? With his purple-power sneakers and his new silver goggles, Freddie is ready to take on any challenge, including something "easy" (like finding out why a squirrel is in school) to the heart-thumping train rescue when a tree falls on the tracks. There is just enough excitement to keep readers turning the page without scaring them, an important feature of this age-appropriate book (best for six- to ten-year-olds).

I did encounter a few minor issues with the story. First, Freddie is able to sneak away from the teachers in order to do his detective work. This is plausible during recess when things are a bit chaotic. However, when he doesn't make it from math class to music, I wonder why the teacher and other students don't notice. Also, language for any book, but particularly for an early reader, is crucial. At one point, Freddie is stuck "in" his desk. He should have been stuck "at" his desk (unless he had been physically trapped).

Aside from those little things, the story is sweet yet adventurous at the same time, and will certainly hold a child's attention. The text and illustrations (black-and-white drawings with a graphic-novel feel) work well together and will motivate a child to continue reading. I'm sure readers will look forward to other Zapato Power adventures! For more about the author, go to www.jacquelinejules.com.


Review of TRIPLICITY/PAPER COVERS ROCK

An interesting concept—a poetry flipbook! We have the work of Kristen McHenry on one side in TRIPLICITY and Chella Courington's PAPER COVERS ROCK on the other.

The "poems in three" by McHenry have some merit. There were poems and stanzas and even just some phrases that caught my eye. "Spock: A Romance in Quotes" was original, and I particularly liked "Too Many Buddhas." However, Courington's work was too dark for me. While many poems were refreshingly honest, at times it felt that images were included for the shock value only without regard to literary worthiness. If a publisher wishes to combine two voices, there must be more than an arbitrary reason to connect and collect them within a single volume.

Aesthetically, the inside margin is narrow and bothersome. For an ironic example, see "Slit." The leading is also slightly off as not all the titles line up quite right. I received an ARC, so perhaps these minor problems were fixed before the print run.

I wish Indigo Ink Press well. They are innovative and have the potential to stay strong in this volatile market. To do so, though, they must be willing to make some difficult decisions as they evaluate the work they are accepting.

My reservations and hesitations aside, if you would like to read something different in poetry, this is a book for you.

To learn more, go to www.IndigoInkPress.org


Review of HOW MEN PRAY

Memories weave in and out of the poems in How Men Pray. There is some element of that, I suppose, in all poetry, but Philip F. Deaver's honest work brings with it a healing touch. One poem recalls his dad "the year before the wreck" and another his mother, whose "house smelled of starch and soap and food," enjoying a meal at Shoney's with only weeks to live. On one level, Deaver accepts the reality of pain, but also questions its purpose. How does the past affect our present, our future, ourselves, our children? What do old typewriters and club houses, lifting "whole worlds upwards" and crosses in sugar have to do with truth? Let's fly with Deaver, "high enough to see the blur of childhood," yet not forget we are also the ones "looking up, squinting hard" as we find meaning in these poems and beyond.

For more, go to Anhinga Press or the Web site of  Philip F. Deaver.



Review of MERCI, MISTER DASH!

Mister Dash, a sophisticated, dapper-dressing dog, likes his quiet routine with Madame Croissant. Monday through Saturday, he is the epitome of manners. But on Sundays, Daphne visits. Daphne is Madame Croissant's granddaughter and she is far from quiet. She is unpredictable, messy, spontaneous...Mister Dash has no use for these qualities. So when Daphne finds herself in trouble, will he be able to set aside his perfect manners to help her? Merci Mister Dash by Monica Kulling (2011 Tundra Books) is a not-to-be-missed read-aloud with expressive illustrations by Esperanca Melo. For more, visit Monica Kulling's Web site.



Review of PLEASE USE THIS FOR CHILDREN

Who has the nerve to write “Please use this for children, and not for war and guns” on her tax return? Poet and pacifist Cynthia Gustavson. Beginning with “Where Artists Come From” until the final poem, Gustavson has a way of igniting sparks with readers. She is honest and fearless (as in “The Boom Site”), knows how to arrange the words to form images (“…syllables singing into history’s ear…”), and requires that we think about our circumstances, about our reactions to whatever is thrown our way (for example, intimately understanding that “…not being moved requires great mobility..."). Please Use This for Children and Not for War and Guns is worth a poetic read. Check out the book on the Blooming Twig Web site.


TOO-TALL TINA at the Summer Beat



Every Weds. in July continuing through Aug. 3, 2011, children's authors will join Watertown (CT) Library's Summer Beat reading program. I'll be there on July 27 to read and sign TOO-TALL TINA. All presentations begin at 10:30 a.m. and are best for children 2 to 12. If you're in the CT area, bring your children, grandchildren, nieces, nephews, neighbors... 

Click HERE for more info.



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